Slow the pace to life
came along days to find
haven’t so late to ride
where to we seek and hide?
Roved all these roads,
to and fro the hill.
Steep or heap ahead,
hold they firm to will.
A step or more to lent
imprints carve all,
rustless! not be silent
lands the dream on wall.
Drastic you feel now
consistent, days prove on
when heaviest drops fall down
fog arises the biggest cascade.
In a nutshell, the poem says:
Each and every little step we take in our life, no matter how slow or fast it is, plays an important role in our life. We go through different paths and experience different things. A strong willed optimistic mind can overcome all the hurdles and reach the goals. Being consistent and by enjoying all the steeps and heaps of life, one can create a beautiful cascade of his dreams.
82 comments
Arjun Suresh
Wow Awesome
Athena S
Thank you so much
Bharath Kannan
All wishes to the Arundhati Roy of Tomorrow … Make us proud as ur buddies jimmy
Athena S
Thank you so much ❤️
Meenakshi
Loved it. Such a beautiful poem
Athena S
Thank you so much
Bindu
Good work
Arjun Suresh
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Sidharth
Awesome
Athena S
Thank you so much
Undaunted champ
Aww…. Elated
Athena S
Thank you so much
Athena S
Thank you so much ❤️
Alan A Vincent
Wonderful
Athena S
Thank you so much
Athena S
Thank you so much ❤️
Noel
The poem surely creates an impression to love each and every walk of life…..Good one Athena.
Athena S
Aaw Thank you so much ❤️
ARSHIN S AJAY
Expecting much more wonderful works from youALL THE BEST FOR YOUR FUTURE
Ajay Krishnan
Beautifully portrayed
ATHENA S
Thank you so much ❤️
SRS
Aaww nice!
Sabith
Level⚡
Aiswarya S Anil
Great work dear
Wishing you all the best….
ATHENA S
Thank you so much ❤️
ATHENA S
Thank you so much ❤️
Sabith Mohammed
Nyc work.. ⚡
ATHENA S
Thank you so much ❤️
SRS
Great work!
Gauthamy Anil
Awesome
Amal
Well done…..my girl …well done….
Arjun
❤️❤️
Jerom AJ
An elegant poem…
Anuroopa
Loved that thought.
Keep writing more chechi.
Sneha
Loved it sooo much.
All the best Chechi.
Renitha
Wowww!!!
Awesome Athena
Good job
Irfan Mohammed
This is absolutely amazing Athena. Keep it up!
Nakul
So well written…!! Keep Going with it
Renitha
Good Job my dear
Habeeba
Omg, poem is so beautiful. Keep going :’)
Naveen
The true meaning is just outstanding . Good job athena , keep it up ❤
Sachin Balagopal
Aesthetically pleasing ♥️
Vivek
Good one Athena
Keep creating
Gopika
Super
Sachin Balagopal
Thoughtful ♥️
Devika Anil
Really awesome keep going chakkare
Nidhin Mahesh
Lovely poem
Wishing you all the best
Devika Vijayan
Nice work dear
Sandhya
Awesome my dear…. Feeling proud
Adhiraj
Superb Chechi… Proud bro.
H Haris
Beautiful.❤️
Nansi
Graet piece dear.Your words are beautiful
Rahul
Awesome poem
Raji.R
Excellent,keep ur steps always to progress
Remya
Super as always dear
Rajeev
Really awesome malu. Nice…….
Gautham Sankar v
Nice one ❤️❤️
Chithra prem kumar
Beautiful
Ajikumar. T
Good poem, keep ot up
Ahammed Khan
Beautiful poem ,philosophical one with nice rythm. Congrats molu…
Senthil S
Fantastic!!
Keep up the good work
Bindu
Good idea and well done molu
Anil
Great Molu
Your thought is very high
Arunima
wow gurllll
Shibi Haris
Awesome dear
Go ahead
Sandhya
Keep going my dear… Feeling proud
Adhiraj
Well done my Chechizzz….Proud bro
Anupama krishna D
Really Good da….keep going
Anupama krishna D
Really Good da….keep going
Ajish m g
An ode to ‘will’.
class
Rajnarayan
Lyrical, metrical and cadenced…!
Integration of infinite drops of nothingness cascading down into the depths of existence. A powerful counter thrust to nihilism.
Athena…..
Aiswarya
It’s beautiful ❤️
Aiswarya
It’s beautiful keep writing!!
Rekha Nair
Nice one dear. Keep writing!
Athena S
Thank you so much ❤️
Vijayalekshmi
Good thought. Best wishes, Athena
Arunjith M
Maalootteee Sooper,
keep going. Best wishes.
Vishnu
Beautiful poem
Renji
Very nice, keep up the good work…
Deepa
Well versed molu….keep going
Athena S
Thank you all❤️❤️❤️
Indhu Unni
Nice poem Dear.
Small and Beautiful..